加上你标题里的两个,凑到41个(玩笑,别介意)。Totally (Total).. how much (how many)
-albeet(昵称);
2005-10-30(#2580265@0)
Your business writing skill is good, better than mine.Weds. -> Wed.
Their seems -> There seems
salesman -> sales people or sales person (gender-specific noun is not allowed in newspaper or formal business document according to Ontario local laws)
-ywgan(gary);
2005-11-1{194}(#2584137@0)
Not that my business writing is good, it is truly because that manager's writing was too aweful. I've never seen anybody's business writing was as bad as that, really.
-albeet(昵称);
2005-11-1(#2584888@0)