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My first read out loud in English.

Please kindly tell me how to improve. Thanks!

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Swallows may have gone, but there is a time of return; willow trees may have died back, but there is a time of regreening; peach blossoms may have fallen, but they will bloom again. Now, you the wise, tell me, why should our days leave us, never to return? - If they had been stolen by someone, who could it be? Where could he hide them? If they had made the escape themselves, then where could they stay at the moment?

I don't know how many days I have been given to spend, but I do feel my hands are getting empty. Taking stock silently, I find that more than eight thousand days have already slid away from me. Like a drop of water from the point of a needle disappearing into the ocean, my days are dripping into the stream of time, soundless, traceless. Already sweat is starting on my forehead, and tears welling up in my eyes。

Those that have gone have gone for good, those to come keep coming; yet in between, how swift is the shift, in such a rush? When I get up in the morning, the slanting sun marks its presence in my small room in two or three oblongs. The sun has feet, look, he is treading on, lightly and furtively; and I am caught, blankly, in his revolution. Thus--the day flows away through the sink when I wash my hands, wears off in the bowl when I eat my meal, and passes away before my day-dreaming gaze as reflect in silence. I can feel his haste now, so I reach out my hands to hold him back, but he keeps flowing past my withholding hands. In the evening, as I lie in bed, he strides over my body, glides past my feet, in his agile way. The moment I open my eyes and meet the sun again, one whole day has gone. I bury my face in my hands and heave a sigh. But the new day begins to flash past in the sigh。

You the wise, tell me, why should our days leave us, never to return?

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  • 工作学习 / 外语学习 / My first read out loud in English. +1
    Please kindly tell me how to improve. Thanks!

    You may need to increase your speaker volume. The recording is not loud enough. The text is below.

    Swallows may have gone, but there is a time of return; willow trees may have died back, but there is a time of regreening; peach blossoms may have fallen, but they will bloom again. Now, you the wise, tell me, why should our days leave us, never to return? - If they had been stolen by someone, who could it be? Where could he hide them? If they had made the escape themselves, then where could they stay at the moment?

    I don't know how many days I have been given to spend, but I do feel my hands are getting empty. Taking stock silently, I find that more than eight thousand days have already slid away from me. Like a drop of water from the point of a needle disappearing into the ocean, my days are dripping into the stream of time, soundless, traceless. Already sweat is starting on my forehead, and tears welling up in my eyes。

    Those that have gone have gone for good, those to come keep coming; yet in between, how swift is the shift, in such a rush? When I get up in the morning, the slanting sun marks its presence in my small room in two or three oblongs. The sun has feet, look, he is treading on, lightly and furtively; and I am caught, blankly, in his revolution. Thus--the day flows away through the sink when I wash my hands, wears off in the bowl when I eat my meal, and passes away before my day-dreaming gaze as reflect in silence. I can feel his haste now, so I reach out my hands to hold him back, but he keeps flowing past my withholding hands. In the evening, as I lie in bed, he strides over my body, glides past my feet, in his agile way. The moment I open my eyes and meet the sun again, one whole day has gone. I bury my face in my hands and heave a sigh. But the new day begins to flash past in the sigh。

    You the wise, tell me, why should our days leave us, never to return?

    • 顶。。。Pretty clear.
      • Thanks~~~ I've been trying to speak in a clear way with correct pronunciation. Still a long way to go.
        • With time, you will get there......Practice makes perfect....
          • Thanks for your encouragement!
        • 比我说得好。不过我还是斗胆指出些问题,其实也是我一直纠结的。就单词而言,重读元音还不够长,也许再重点会好点?就整个句子而言,语调不大对劲,我也说不出怎么不对劲,反正听着不顺,也许再练练会流畅些?
          • Thanks for your suggestions. I do need to practise more. To be honest, I'm not sure how to read with tone properly for this article. :(
          • . +2
    • 读得认真,字斟句酌。赞。
      • Thanks!
    • 一直以为LZ是女生~~~好象语调平了点, 木有重读音节, 语速慢了点~~~
      • "一直以为LZ是女生", me too. LZ像是脾气比较平和的人。
        • 是个认真学习的人, no doubt :P
          • 坚决同意!
      • Thanks for your comments!
      • 一听就是男生啦,不像女生。Lz读的不错拉,对国人来讲good enough 啦,没有很重的口音,练练应该会更好,加油!
    • My two cents: +1
      I wouldn’t pick material that is too “literature”, absolutely not something translated from Chinese original. It’s just too far away from real-life English. If possible, try something closer to everyday conversation, recorded by native speaker, so you can be your own judge.
      • Thanks for your suggestions. Agree with you. I did feel kind of awkward when I was reading that article. Will read more English English.
        • You’re welcome, you might get better results by just selecting the "right" material. :)
          I think speaking English fluently is more important than eliminating accent. I have seen lots of Indian folks with very strong accent, but communicate very efficiently. That being said, if you think you can work on accent, go for it, it’s definitely something "nice to have".
      • 很有道理。
    • 为啥是男声?很好,我是说录音机质量很好。。。
      • Why not 男声?
        • interesting point..
    • 听着跟发音好的印度人似的。反正一点中国人的口音没有了,那语调偏南亚了。
    • 我觉得跟着CBC广播模仿和跟说一段时间或许对口音和语速语调有所帮助,just my 2 cents. +1
      • Yup! Thanks!
    • 1. 最好不要找中文翻译成英文的散文,不适合朗读。2. 培养英语语感,最好是拿一篇文章反复读,快读,慢读,精度,粗读,最后调整到正常的语速。3. 建议多听英语的歌曲,新闻,元音,辅音的发声长短,轻重是需要长期的语感的。。。 +1
      • Thanks!
    • ea 和 ee 读的时候,嘴可以再张开一点,拖长一点,比如读 stream.....读的不错,赞
    • 读的挺好的,建议吞音的时候,不发音但是口型和舌头还是要到位的。