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我的英语小说《那个颠婆》,讨教

本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛That Lunatic Lady
By Huang Juan

Younger sister's nearly turn through the clothes cabinet , for her long separation boyfriend returning, treats repeatedly is puting on clothes before the mirror. If that lunatic woman, she will only not have this patience. Certainly, if is that lunatic woman, she also have not many clothes to possible supply the choice. She back and forth always that in 2-3 sets , does not like her this age simply woman.

These ideas flow rapidly from his mind with a smile, just as if water in the mouth , comes the nature. One did not know when from starts, must make once for a while association about that lunatic woman, who was irrelevant to him, always yearning for travels and did not fear to sit the third-class compartment . Or, is similar to a painter, always unavoidably must associate from some colors to a picture. The influence is solid, sometimes, because a young fellow rides his bicycle to pass through slightly for crowded place clever like fish throught crack, he thought that - - with some ridicule meaning, if that lunatic woman, she should must got out. Indeed, how can you believe that a person who has many years driving vehicle experience , the trick-cycling is such disappointment? Moreover, she will also wrinkle the brow, look like somewhat impatient appearance - - she will not be that kind person who likes to delay time on the road , her goal going to the streets, also will be similar to her intention of life, will be very explicit.

and if he saw a girl holds A bunch of fresh flowers , walking nearby her boyfriend,and full shine over her face, he knew that she will not look at them second eyes. and if some female does whines, let the man keep the woman's packet for her, she will display really more, will not mince matter her despite, although she will also be glad to help the men vanity the self-respect, did not oppose that they will open the door for her, will not tease them to study to show so-called woman first, but this will be very a few chance matter. She don't likes love to keep relation with people, sometimes she also had some quite romantic ideas, she even wants met with the remote pen pal in the remote,and strange desert island,or the forest ,or the desert for they are all!

Sometimes goes back to the parents home, listens to the younger sister's friends to talk in her room of this and that ,(he will be tactful places oneself, does not go to next door), is annoying the words which for some sentence the human laughs provokes laughter, he would think, if that lunatic woman, as soon as she must clap to call a sound “oh ~~” fiercely, she had that enthusiasm, her south climate long quiet erupts soon from hers odd, makes one to be able bear simply, but he always not once esteemed this kind of nervousness. He has even learned the true meaning cover in being smiling, although he thought he himself was serious. Sometimes, sigh closes a book, not reason he maybe will think suddenly, if that lunatic woman, when she readed some place , she must certainly had tears streaming down the face.
one day,When they are having the sumptuous lunch silently, a while he for no reason was smiling suddenly still. The wife asked him strangely, what smiled? He said nothing, but later,he thought it seem he ought to give her some explanation better, then he told her that a colleague said their head didn't mean feared his wife , fearing,was only the representation of will(that time Schopenhauer Arther was just popular again).
His colleagues who do evil as something interesting frequently, will be without doubt to say that this kind .they will walk far frequently, but, that little while, he in fact was thinking that day ,he unexpectedly fully had been being mad through a morning,just for that lunatic woman's a unkind sentence, will be too stupid really.

But, some day will come when he saying out clear inadvertently. That lunatic woman was similar to the key button which he works must by, often used - - that lunatic woman writed to her past schoolmate , that lunatic woman called the wrong person when she walked on the road, she as if iron heart cannot wear the eyeglasses for myopia, that lunatic woman made the smart sand buckle , when she replied others' care “why hasn't married” , saying that because the housework question was similar to the Middle East Peace, to solve the difficult problem is really not a while enough.

That night he and his colleagues who had the values out of the ordinary drinking outside jubilant ,when he got in home, sat down and opened a newspaper, he said suddenly, “that lunatic woman, she should can't bear so much later ”.
He said that no a bit cared of, nearby the corners of the mouth also faintly hangs to ascertain the airtight happy expression. Was similar to the human who drank said careless ,that this liquor was mixed with water. But his wife actually immediately looked at him solidly. Is similar to the women they would have some strange ideas no any reason in certain time , in her brain hits a flash idea coming from ourside open. However he is all right quite the same to read his newspaper independent, from the ramble which acts in a completely informal or uninhibited manner , did not know why she does feel suddenly a little coldly.更多精彩文章及讨论,请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net
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  • 工作学习 / 外语学习 / 我的英语小说《那个颠婆》,讨教
    本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛That Lunatic Lady
    By Huang Juan

    Younger sister's nearly turn through the clothes cabinet , for her long separation boyfriend returning, treats repeatedly is puting on clothes before the mirror. If that lunatic woman, she will only not have this patience. Certainly, if is that lunatic woman, she also have not many clothes to possible supply the choice. She back and forth always that in 2-3 sets , does not like her this age simply woman.

    These ideas flow rapidly from his mind with a smile, just as if water in the mouth , comes the nature. One did not know when from starts, must make once for a while association about that lunatic woman, who was irrelevant to him, always yearning for travels and did not fear to sit the third-class compartment . Or, is similar to a painter, always unavoidably must associate from some colors to a picture. The influence is solid, sometimes, because a young fellow rides his bicycle to pass through slightly for crowded place clever like fish throught crack, he thought that - - with some ridicule meaning, if that lunatic woman, she should must got out. Indeed, how can you believe that a person who has many years driving vehicle experience , the trick-cycling is such disappointment? Moreover, she will also wrinkle the brow, look like somewhat impatient appearance - - she will not be that kind person who likes to delay time on the road , her goal going to the streets, also will be similar to her intention of life, will be very explicit.

    and if he saw a girl holds A bunch of fresh flowers , walking nearby her boyfriend,and full shine over her face, he knew that she will not look at them second eyes. and if some female does whines, let the man keep the woman's packet for her, she will display really more, will not mince matter her despite, although she will also be glad to help the men vanity the self-respect, did not oppose that they will open the door for her, will not tease them to study to show so-called woman first, but this will be very a few chance matter. She don't likes love to keep relation with people, sometimes she also had some quite romantic ideas, she even wants met with the remote pen pal in the remote,and strange desert island,or the forest ,or the desert for they are all!

    Sometimes goes back to the parents home, listens to the younger sister's friends to talk in her room of this and that ,(he will be tactful places oneself, does not go to next door), is annoying the words which for some sentence the human laughs provokes laughter, he would think, if that lunatic woman, as soon as she must clap to call a sound “oh ~~” fiercely, she had that enthusiasm, her south climate long quiet erupts soon from hers odd, makes one to be able bear simply, but he always not once esteemed this kind of nervousness. He has even learned the true meaning cover in being smiling, although he thought he himself was serious. Sometimes, sigh closes a book, not reason he maybe will think suddenly, if that lunatic woman, when she readed some place , she must certainly had tears streaming down the face.
    one day,When they are having the sumptuous lunch silently, a while he for no reason was smiling suddenly still. The wife asked him strangely, what smiled? He said nothing, but later,he thought it seem he ought to give her some explanation better, then he told her that a colleague said their head didn't mean feared his wife , fearing,was only the representation of will(that time Schopenhauer Arther was just popular again).
    His colleagues who do evil as something interesting frequently, will be without doubt to say that this kind .they will walk far frequently, but, that little while, he in fact was thinking that day ,he unexpectedly fully had been being mad through a morning,just for that lunatic woman's a unkind sentence, will be too stupid really.

    But, some day will come when he saying out clear inadvertently. That lunatic woman was similar to the key button which he works must by, often used - - that lunatic woman writed to her past schoolmate , that lunatic woman called the wrong person when she walked on the road, she as if iron heart cannot wear the eyeglasses for myopia, that lunatic woman made the smart sand buckle , when she replied others' care “why hasn't married” , saying that because the housework question was similar to the Middle East Peace, to solve the difficult problem is really not a while enough.

    That night he and his colleagues who had the values out of the ordinary drinking outside jubilant ,when he got in home, sat down and opened a newspaper, he said suddenly, “that lunatic woman, she should can't bear so much later ”.
    He said that no a bit cared of, nearby the corners of the mouth also faintly hangs to ascertain the airtight happy expression. Was similar to the human who drank said careless ,that this liquor was mixed with water. But his wife actually immediately looked at him solidly. Is similar to the women they would have some strange ideas no any reason in certain time , in her brain hits a flash idea coming from ourside open. However he is all right quite the same to read his newspaper independent, from the ramble which acts in a completely informal or uninhibited manner , did not know why she does feel suddenly a little coldly.更多精彩文章及讨论,请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net
    • 辛苦了.
      • 唔,在学习英语,就不知道什么样
        • 语法句法错误比较多,不过如果你坚持写,英语提高肯定很快,建议多读一些英文小说。
          • 谢谢。我就是没有磨刀功夫和耐心。罗宾逊漂流记看许久了还没完
            • 思而不学则贻,英文写作是不能自己蛮干的,一定要先通过阅读来掌握其规律。比如你写的这句“If that lunatic woman, she will only not have this patience. ”,就很难让人明白.....
              • 翻译: "要是换成那个疯婆子, 她才没有那个耐心呢"
                • No. Might be: She will not be patient with the lunatic woman. But if it is a handsome young gentleman... Anyway, this is out of context ;-)
                • 原来已经有两个朋友在说事了。我一看蛮干不行说得中肯,就先回,没顾上看底下。我很想问一下,酷猫是不是我在天涯的那个朋友,看你第一个回帖时我就在疑心了
                  • 呵呵, 看你写了不少, 鼓励下. 我除了rolia, 不上其他任何中文论坛的.
              • (笑)。谢谢你。我如今也在一边开双语视频学习,只是不那么上心。“要是那个颠婆,她才没有那份耐心”,不知怎么译好
                • 双语视频学习--Could you give me a link, please? Thanks.
                  • http://www.uctube.cn/default.aspx歌曲,超级好的网站,可以与国外生活同步学习外语,娱乐与学习同时
                    • 另外,有时译文不是很好。不过其中错误你会看出来
    • 用Twilight做个英语入门,其句式简单易懂,词汇量要求极少,但笔法细腻,情节吸引人。能写成那样就不错了。
      • 刚看了Breaking Dawn前几章, 满眼的SEX :P. 的确是越来越奇特了.
        • yep..the last book was quite different than the first 3
      • 是不是那个歌手?还是有什么节目?
        • 电影?
          • Novel
            • 哦。我没有这本小说。则同名电影大约由此改编的
    • 你怎么学习英语的?什么材料呢?我也想提高写作。
      • 看原文。我想大概都这样