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太老套了，

gangw1(Gang)
本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛here are from ChatGPT "Here are some potential last couple sentences for a co-op student's resume:

"I am excited to bring my skills and enthusiasm to a new co-op opportunity and contribute to a dynamic and collaborative team."

"Through my co-op experiences, I have gained valuable skills in [list relevant skills], and I am eager to continue to develop and apply these skills in a new co-op position."

"I am grateful for the opportunity to have worked with [previous co-op employer], and I am confident that the experience I gained there will make me a valuable addition to any team."

"I am a highly motivated and detail-oriented individual with a strong work ethic and a passion for [relevant field]. I look forward to bringing these qualities to a new co-op role and making a meaningful contribution."

Choose the sentence that best reflects your own experiences and goals as a co-op student. Remember to proofread your resume carefully before submitting it to potential employers. Good luck!"更多精彩文章及讨论，请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net
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  • 工作学习 / 外语学习 / 请教：孩子在找coop, 求职信里最后一句：I look forward to working with you and hope to hear from you soon. 我写的话会是：I am looking forward to working for you and hope to hear from you soon. 有区别吗？ -235(豹平安); 2023-2-19 {90} (#15207531@0)
    我觉得 work for 是为你工作，更贴切一些。work with 是合作，强调了主体的平等关系。欢迎解惑。
    • 以我的理解和我会写的格式，我也赞成你孩子的写法。”Work with you “，就是一起工作的意思。无论这封回信是写给老板，经理或者是人事部，新人将来都是希望能跟他们“一起”工作，而不是专门“为“他们而工作。我觉得大家都是为“公司“而工作，而不是为了某一个人而工作。 -starxing(星 💫 之愿); 2023-2-19 {156} (#15207607@0) +5

      “Work for you", 为“您”工作，我通常会用在回复顾客的。不过，不是直译地“为您工作”.例如，We will provide this service for you.

      就用的“for " .

      • 同意 -111111(快乐老家); 2023-2-19 (#15207612@0)
        • 😁你也投赞成他的孩子 -starxing(星 💫 之愿); 2023-2-19 (#15207720@0)
      • 受教，谢谢。我是不太自信，说谦卑也好。 -235(豹平安); 2023-2-19 (#15207614@0)
        • 对，你的那种讲法是传统的文化模式的，不过，这里的文化不一样，可以直呼老板的英文名。所以，你孩子的那个思维是正确的👍，我赞成他😄。 -starxing(星 💫 之愿); 2023-2-19 (#15207717@0)
    • 相信娃 -veronicacan(LogicalVolume); 2023-2-19 (#15207623@0) +4
      • 谢谢。是得放手的时候了。 -235(豹平安); 2023-2-19 (#15207630@0)
        • 好爸爸啊.我家我追着也就知道两面试，具体也不说了，只告诉未来有结果再知会 -yihan(逸涵); 2023-2-19 (#15207782@0)
          • 哈哈，就是闲的。你家人中龙凤肯定没问题，我家情商待提高，也是被他爸爸折磨坏了。 -235(豹平安); 2023-2-19 (#15207807@0) +3
        • 真是个好爸爸👍其实毋须纠结一字的不同 -veronicacan(LogicalVolume); 2023-2-19 {118} (#15207843@0)

          基本没时间读cover letter ，这种语义的细微差异很难被注意。简历写好，关键字给全更重要。

          祝小豹找coop 顺利。

          • 谢谢谬赞。会转告他秘诀。 -235(豹平安); 2023-2-19 (#15208349@0)
        • 这边长大的孩子英文还要你质疑？ -smallbee(别怕，不蛰你🐝); 2023-2-19 (#15208333@0)
    • 哈哈哈，可怜天下父母心啊，扶上马，还要送一程。 -8232(无所谓); 2023-2-19 (#15207692@0)
      • 送不了啦，不拖马腿就好。 -235(豹平安); 2023-2-19 (#15207695@0)
        • 都说work with you, 还没见过写work for you 的 -**🍐; 2023-2-19 (#15207729@0) +1
          • 老豹是在小豹面前班门弄斧呀 -8232(无所谓); 2023-2-19 (#15207750@0)
            • 谢谢，比夸我还高兴。 -235(豹平安); 2023-2-19 (#15207765@0)
    • 你这该有多久没写coverletter了呀。 -mapleleafss(MapleLeafs); 2023-2-19 (#15207730@0) +2
      • 汗颜，好久了。 -235(豹平安); 2023-2-19 (#15207763@0)
        • 不用汗颜，这说明你很满足现状过得很好。唯一的遗憾是容易脱节，和你的孩子不在一条船上了。崭新的世界你不懂，你孩子懂😂 -mapleleafss(MapleLeafs); 2023-2-19 (#15207786@0)
    • 只有 sheldon cooper 会较真你到底是 work with him 还是 work for him... -xmlhttprequest(build5381); 2023-2-19 (#15207831@0) +1
    • 发给chatGPT, 让她帮你改一下就好了。 -bushunyan(theCabinInTheWoods); 2023-2-19 (#15207860@0)
    • 小豹的” I look forward to…”是正確的寫法”,你的” I am looking forward to…”,不適合用在這類信件,至於work with,work for那個正確?得看你找的主管對下屬的態度,如果完全不認識,建議完全不寫,自薦信能寫的太多了 -youarenotfunnyatall(草山); 2023-2-19 {20} (#15207915@0) +2
      如果一定要寫,用joint
      • 谢谢草山兄。 -235(豹平安); 2023-2-19 (#15208263@0)
    • 要么work for xxx company. -lovebb(ROCK); 2023-2-19 (#15207935@0)
    • 你孩子写的完全正确 -ihug(Ihug); 2023-2-19 (#15208026@0)
    • 有模版的。小孩能搞掂，放心吧！ -sipp(happy); 2023-2-19 (#15208044@0)
    • 按照你的写法后面应该是and hoping，前后时态要一致 -honeylager(No Name); 2023-2-19 (#15208046@0)
    • 小豹英文比老豹好 -jtax(_); 2023-2-19 (#15208051@0)
    • 从语言表达逻辑上看，我觉得这样更顺溜，I hope I have the opportunity to work with you and I look forward to hearing from you soon. -naidanac(劳者); 2023-2-19 (#15208138@0)
    • 老移民不需要对孩子的英文指点迷津。 -thegirlbefore(：); 2023-2-19 (#15208155@0) +1
    • 再次一并感谢楼上各位。顺祝各位家庭日合家欢乐！平安幸福！！ -235(豹平安); 2023-2-19 (#15208273@0) +1
    • 太老套了， -gangw1(Gang); 2023-2-19 {1025} (#15208537@0) +2
      本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛here are from ChatGPT "Here are some potential last couple sentences for a co-op student's resume:

      "I am excited to bring my skills and enthusiasm to a new co-op opportunity and contribute to a dynamic and collaborative team."

      "Through my co-op experiences, I have gained valuable skills in [list relevant skills], and I am eager to continue to develop and apply these skills in a new co-op position."

      "I am grateful for the opportunity to have worked with [previous co-op employer], and I am confident that the experience I gained there will make me a valuable addition to any team."

      "I am a highly motivated and detail-oriented individual with a strong work ethic and a passion for [relevant field]. I look forward to bringing these qualities to a new co-op role and making a meaningful contribution."

      Choose the sentence that best reflects your own experiences and goals as a co-op student. Remember to proofread your resume carefully before submitting it to potential employers. Good luck!"更多精彩文章及讨论，请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net
      • 以后HR收到的都是千篇一律的官样文章了。 -mapleleafss(MapleLeafs); 2023-2-19 (#15208573@0)
        • 错，chatgpt每次生成的是不一样的 -gangw1(Gang); 2023-2-19 (#15208580@0)
          • 太神奇了，那老师怎么会知道学生用没用GPT呢？ -mapleleafss(MapleLeafs); 2023-2-19 (#15208586@0)
            • 很多学校现在禁止chatgpt，也有chatgpt识别软件 -gangw1(Gang); 2023-2-19 (#15208595@0)
      • 好玩，谢谢。已转犬子。 -235(豹平安); 2023-2-19 (#15208582@0)
        • 多用新科技，让你儿子关注AI -gangw1(Gang); 2023-2-19 (#15208598@0)
          • 他儿子肯定不用我们这些老古董提醒😂 -mapleleafss(MapleLeafs); 2023-2-19 (#15208731@0)
    • 记住只用 "work with you…”，要体现民主社会众生平等的优越性。😂 -sunny5158(小米); 2023-2-19 (#15208590@0)
    • "I look forward" is formal than "I am looking forward" -tiger1207(tiger1207); 2023-3-19 (#15279155@0)

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